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Mar. 30th, 2005 @ 10:00 pm (no subject)
venchin:
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Parlez vouz francais? No? Well, I do. I'm awake, bored and need something to do. Someone interest me, please. MAybe a couple of donuts would do me good and then a coke to bring down some hamburgers. Are there any writers in here? I'm deadly bored to critique something.
From:sleepybear1
Date:March 31st, 2005 02:13 pm (UTC)
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oui, je parlez frrancais. Ca va?
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From:sleepybear1
Date:March 31st, 2005 02:21 pm (UTC)
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oh, i do write also btw...
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From:venchin
Date:March 31st, 2005 03:51 pm (UTC)
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You do? Well, good. But watch your spelling, at least i can say that. 'Je parle francais'. Otherwise, i am doing great, thanks for asking. So you write? Maybe you could write something for me and I'll read it to see if you're really good.
Don't ask me if you need help on any french, I'm bad at it horribly, otherwise english is good. :b
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From:sleepybear1
Date:March 31st, 2005 04:37 pm (UTC)
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yea, my french is horrible....lol THEN ONE DAY I ALMOST HAD YOU
ALL RAPPED UP IN MY BLANKET OF LOVE
WITH MY ARMS FOREVER HOLDING YOU
KEEPING YOU ALWAYS SAFE
aND THEN I ALMOST HAD YOU
EVEN CLOSER THIS TIME
YOU BIG BEAUTIFUL EYES WERE SHINING
BUT THEN YOU SLIPPED AWAY
THRID TIMES A CHARM THEY ALWAYS SAY
AND I FINALLY HAD YOU
BUT THEN YOU WERE GONE
YOUR FACE I HARDLY REMEMBER
WISHING THAT YOU HAD NEVER LEFT
KNOWING IT WAS FOR THE BEST
FOR YOU THAT IS-
NOT ME
I TRY TO RECALL
THE SMELL OF YOU HAIR
THE WARMTH OF YOU KISS
IT WAS SO LONG AGO
MEMORIES DONT LAST FOREVER

that is something i wrote quickly one day
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From:venchin
Date:March 31st, 2005 09:53 pm (UTC)
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SO you're a romance writer, eh? Quite cool, though I'm not into romance that much. It's pretty good, in between I say. I'd like to hear more if you got anymore, I love to read and comment back on them.

Tell, me, you read a lot?
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From:sleepybear1
Date:April 1st, 2005 01:41 am (UTC)
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yes, i read ALL the time, its better than watching TV and as far as my writing, its all right, im not to sure its all that good


My Views
Idea's of space, ideas of time
Idea's of what's yours, idea's, not mine!
Using your brain is key in life
Yet your life can be cut short, with only a knife
What's the difference if one person dies?
It's not like it'll effect everyone's lives
Life comes life goes
Life gives us leaders and "hoes"
God's just fiction,
An excuse for our exisitance
The bible tell lies,
Believing them will be your demise
Untitled
In the darkness where angels cry
The truth comes out, we all shall die
Hiding in my secret place
So the fear I wont have to face
Burning flesh, death and hell
Into darkness the world hath fell
The shadows filter into our lives
Blocking the sun and blinding our eyes
Hiding what is truly there
Because the truth humanity cannot bear


see, its not all romantic, i write what i feel, not what i feel pleases people...
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From:venchin
Date:April 2nd, 2005 01:10 pm (UTC)
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Awesome! I love it! Man, maybe i should print the poem and nail it to the wall. Maybe it'll make people realize what life is all about. You should publish, you know.
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From:sleepybear1
Date:April 16th, 2005 03:29 pm (UTC)
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i wish that i had the money to do that.... it takes money to make money
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From:gayboi88
Date:April 3rd, 2005 09:04 pm (UTC)
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je parle le français un peu ;)
si tu veux, on pourrait parler...
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From:venchin
Date:April 4th, 2005 09:38 pm (UTC)
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Oh la la! Tu parles francais un peu? Bien, bien. J'espere nous faire la connassance de l'un l'autre.
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From:gayboi88
Date:April 4th, 2005 10:03 pm (UTC)
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Je ne comprends pas la phrase "j'espere nous faire la connassance de l'un l'autre"

Qu'est-ce que vous avez dit?
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From:gayboi88
Date:April 4th, 2005 10:05 pm (UTC)
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Sag's auf Deutsch!
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From:gayboi88
Date:April 3rd, 2005 09:08 pm (UTC)
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ich habe gelesen, daß du auch deustch kann! schön!
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From:venchin
Date:April 5th, 2005 12:15 am (UTC)
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oui, mais je suis mieux en francias. Je suis maintenant en etats unis pour aussi longtemps que je suis tente a s'adapter francais, et oublier allemand.
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From:venchin
Date:April 5th, 2005 12:22 am (UTC)
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Je tete a ma francaise un peu...:-).
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